Okay this is my text from the school project that i wrote and got an A. the theme is ‘our idol in life’ and i choosed to write about paris. Please tell me what u think 
its a little long.
I love a lot of celebrities, but Paris Whitney Hilton will always have a special part in my heart and life.
She was born February 17, 1981 in New York and she is a model,singer,author,fashion designer and actress.I love her since she was in the ‘Simple life’ and I loved to watch her and Nicole Richie.I’m a big fan since then.I have a wall in my room covered with her pictures and posters,and I almost always buy magazines when I see her inside.But,those magazines are giving us a wrong picture about her and that’s annoying me.It’s really easy to judge people,and everyone makes mistakes.right?
When I made twitter (January 2010) I made it just to see what’s she up to.I first thought that she’s not tweeting, maybe some other people who work for her.But nevermind, I started to reply to her without wanting a reply or a follow.then maybe 2 hours after, I got two replies and a follow.I was AMAZED.then I was sure it was her posting tweets.she replied a few more times and that really made my life.I know it sounds stupid,but I’m a big big big fan and knowing that she saw what I wrote made me so happy.then she made a commumity where her fans post stuff about her, like pictures and music.and the best thing about it is that she cares about it,and updates us about what’s she doing,and comments our posts.
Paris is my idol because she learned me to be grateful,confident and a good person inside.Everytime I’m down, I think about the things I have and how many people all over the world don’t have a warm meal.Paris often helps that kind of people with her charity work.she is a huge inspiration.I love to write about her and even when I see her picture or something on TV with her I’m so excited.I think that there’s no words to express how much I love her.she is my whole world and much more.I also made a poem for her and she tweeted it.I really wish her all of the best in life because she is more like a saint,and she deserves it.I love her so much and she makes me happy every second of the day and I would REALLY give my life for her. We should have more people like Paris in this world.
Paris Hilton: Okay this is my text from the school pro…